Any idea who drew Callista (first drawing if you don't know who she is), if it's on DeviantART I would very much like the link or at least the username of the artist, if it was found on google then nevermind
Ah ok, and yes that is a good idea. I'm not gonna lie, I actually clicked on the deviation simply because I liked the character. (I didn't even know it was a poem to be honest, it just shows that I just look at the picture and don't bother with the title and category)
But I gave the poem a read and it was pretty good.
I think this has potential, but it wasn't executed in the best form for the idea. I think that the "poem" format doesn't convey the message quite as well as say a "drabble" format (if that is even the right term).
Also, I know this is "free verse" but it is lacking a certain flow. It seems to stop suddenly at times and turn to a new point.
I like the idea though and I am not trying to be a troll or anything.
My name is Snow. I am pure as snow. They say I have the purest heart. But there is no such thing as purity… See, purity is an illusion that people use to block the horrors of life. Everybody hates reality. And I hate reality, because deep inside, I’m an animal. I’m insane. I’m just waiting for it to surface. Locked up for years. My ‘purity’ remains. But I am no longer sane. I am not some perfect LITTLE DOLL FROM A WINTER WONDERLAND. I’M A MONSTER.
Just wait. I'll relieve all of their pain. All of them.
I love the poem, I like how it point out purity is a illusion and the second picture to go along with it. Kinda reminded me of my own thinking, I believe everyone is crazy in their own way but there is always a illusion to cover it up. I might be bad a putting words to my thoughts so if you don't understand what I am getting at it is understandable xD
yeah, I know, but just because others do it doesn't make it okay.. there are a lot of art thieves but that doesn't make art theft any better. bullying isn't okay just because a lot of other people do it too.. just an example. so yeah, please don't do it in the future anymore because I know I would get really really mad if someone just copied my image into one of their poems. imagine if someone stole your art.. I don't think you would be happy either.
(it's actually even against the rules of DA and you can get reported for it)
no, it's okay! I'm glad that you are one of the people who will actually listen.. some people will just block people or hide their comments if they get criticized, and that's really annoying. :I I'm glad you found someone!
very nice, im not that interested in writing and do you write about what reflects on you or you make this up? also HOW MUCH WRITINGS DO YOU HAVE?!!? and too much uploads at once but well that doesnt matter really, im just saying XDD