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.:Poem:. Purity is just an illusion by MelinaThePoet .:Poem:. Purity is just an illusion by MelinaThePoet

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... to cover up the horrors of life, in which we dont want to face.

( she has darker hair in the 2nd picture because that's her dark form... her inner self.)
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MiserableHappiness Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Callista!
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Redlink5050 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
very nice!!! and cute pic.s!
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.

I do not own the pics, but dont worry they're getting replaced soon.
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Redlink5050 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
I like the pics! and it's good! you're welcome
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TairoruXRyuu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OmgomgIlovethis.
No matter how pure snow is, it's fact that all snowflakes form around a speck of dirt, so no snow is truly 'pure'.

Aaaaa I love this to death <3
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank you :) I was kinda mad how snow white as all like so pure blah blah blah .. I was like.. rllly disney?
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TairoruXRyuu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, yeah~ I'm a snow enthusiast, and when I read about it, I was kinda shocked.

But this poem just sort of hit me, you know?

Thanks for the watch~ :D *returns*
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank YOU. ;)
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Dudet19 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow.
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Detective-May Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Any idea who drew Callista (first drawing if you don't know who she is), if it's on DeviantART I would very much like the link or at least the username of the artist, if it was found on google then nevermind ^^;
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
it was found on google. My friend is going to draw pics to replace all these soon . :)
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Detective-May Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah ok, and yes that is a good idea. I'm not gonna lie, I actually clicked on the deviation simply because I liked the character. (I didn't even know it was a poem to be honest, it just shows that I just look at the picture and don't bother with the title and category)

But I gave the poem a read and it was pretty good.
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah basically the pics were for temporary use... I thank you for the concern! and thanks for the compliment on my poem :)
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Detective-May Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome
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Lazy-Coffee Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this has potential, but it wasn't executed in the best form for the idea. I think that the "poem" format doesn't convey the message quite as well as say a "drabble" format (if that is even the right term).

Also, I know this is "free verse" but it is lacking a certain flow. It seems to stop suddenly at times and turn to a new point.

I like the idea though and I am not trying to be a troll or anything.
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
I understand. I'm not a super good writer. :/
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Lazy-Coffee Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Not many people are, but I think that you have the potential to become very good! I am just trying to help, but I don't really write much so sorry if I intruded.
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
dont apologize haha its okay. :D
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Lazy-Coffee Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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ooValkyrie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I love the drawing but I don't have PDF to read the poem
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
My name is Snow.
I am pure as snow.
They say I have the purest heart.
But there is no such thing as purity…
See, purity is an illusion that people use to block the horrors of life.
Everybody hates reality.
And I hate reality, because deep inside, I’m an animal.
I’m insane.
I’m just waiting for it to surface.
Locked up for years.
My ‘purity’ remains.
But I am no longer sane.
I am not some perfect LITTLE DOLL FROM A WINTER WONDERLAND.
I’M A MONSTER.

Just wait.
I'll relieve all of their pain.
All of them.
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ooValkyrie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you so much awesome poem
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
hey no problem... and thank you.
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ooValkyrie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome :)
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theartsydoglover Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome poem!
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank you.
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SilverQ10 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your writing always speaks too me... it is really good. Wish i could write like that 0-0
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Hey man... Thanks ;)
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SilverQ10 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Welcome :D
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naxrusnekro Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I love the poem, I like how it point out purity is a illusion and the second picture to go along with it. Kinda reminded me of my own thinking, I believe everyone is crazy in their own way but there is always a illusion to cover it up. I might be bad a putting words to my thoughts so if you don't understand what I am getting at it is understandable xD
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
I under stand what u mean. Thanks!!
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naxrusnekro Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
:)
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ChisaiCho Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you shouldn't take images off the internet without asking the people who own them, it's really not okay. :I it's actually art theft, even if you admit that you didn't draw them.

on another note, I like the poem...
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Aw sorry.. I saw on the front page.. People use others art for poems all the time. -_-
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ChisaiCho Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, I know, but just because others do it doesn't make it okay.. there are a lot of art thieves but that doesn't make art theft any better.
bullying isn't okay just because a lot of other people do it too.. just an example.
so yeah, please don't do it in the future anymore because I know I would get really really mad if someone just copied my image into one of their poems. imagine if someone stole your art.. I don't think you would be happy either.

(it's actually even against the rules of DA and you can get reported for it)
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Right. I found a friend who will let me borrow his drawings. SORRY about that!
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ChisaiCho Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no, it's okay! I'm glad that you are one of the people who will actually listen.. some people will just block people or hide their comments if they get criticized, and that's really annoying. :I
I'm glad you found someone!
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Yes. I kinda had a feeling.. So I used those for now but I won't do it anymore! Thanks for the concern and support!
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ChisaiCho Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww you're welcome! thanks for not being rude and listening to me.. and like I said, I like your poem, so keep up the good work!
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Your welcome. ;) I hate it when people are like ooooo nooooo *block* that's just dumb LOL
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Huntrave Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
oh my god.
you awasome! Love your drawings,AND poetry.
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Writer
Excuse me.. I didn't draw these. UNFORTUNATELY I wish I did. But seeing as people who made it on the front page did it... Well..
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Huntrave Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
oh o:
nothing :)
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ChisaiCho Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...but she didn't draw the pictures.
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xzael Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very nice, im not that interested in writing and do you write about what reflects on you or you make this up? also HOW MUCH WRITINGS DO YOU HAVE?!!? and too much uploads at once but well that doesnt matter really, im just saying XDD
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
Sorry about all the uploads... you found me literally 5 mins after I joined but I only had that one pre-made story.

I half make it up.
I half base it on my own emotions.
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xzael Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh sorry, i guess it seems like im making a deal about it but its all good, aha yeah i did ^^; hmmm i see, thats nice :D
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah. SORRRRRRYYYYY. I'm a quick thinker and typer x3
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xzael Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha, no need to apologize!!! XD well thats great!!~ :D
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MelinaThePoet Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
haha okay :) thanks again.
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